Raditz

[Raditz]

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LIKES:

• Fighting
  
• Training
  
• Growing Stronger
  
• His Son
  
• Challenges

DISLIKES:

• Dr. Hypnos
  
• Freeza
  
• Weakness
  
• Laziness
  
• Ignorance

PERSONALITY:

STRENGTHS:

• Speed
  
• Determination
  
• Willpower
  
• Strength
  
• Intelligence

WEAKNESSES:

• Arrogance
  
• Underestimating of others
  
• Mouthy
  
• Destructive
  
• Shoot first, Ask questions later

WEAPONS / PERSONAL ITEMS:

• His own cunning
  
• Occasional scouter usage
  

TECHNIQUES:

• Flight
  
• Ki Blast
  
• Afterimage
  
• Saiyan Soul
  
• Chou Makouhou
  

SIGNATURE MOVES:

• Weekly Special;; Raditz fires flurries of large, bright Ki Blasts that is more powerful than the average energy volley. It is useful for quick, effective, and causing massive accumulations of damage to his opponents.
  
• Dynamite Monday;; Raditz charges up to his opponent and attacks with a vicious combo attack comprised of punches and kicks, which can then be extended into a multitude of punches before finishing it with a roundhouse kick that attempts knock the opponent to the ground, inflicting a high amount of damage.
  
• Saturday Crush;; This is an energy sphere used by Raditz. First, he holds his right hand high in the air and forms a pink energy sphere. Then, he fires off the sphere at the opponent, inflicting a great amount of damage.
  
• Shining Friday;; This is a more powerful version of the Saturday Crush. First, Raditz raises his hand and charges purple and orange electricity. Then, he forms the electricity in a large, pink energy sphere and strikes his opponent with it
  
• Begone!;; This attack is an energy wave used by Raditz. He first raises his hand up in the air and creates a small white energy sphere. Then, he fires it in the form of a large energy wave at his opponent, inflicting a great amount of damage.
  
• Double Sunday;; One of Raditz's energy wave barrages. He raises both of his arms up and charges two purple energy spheres. He then brings his hands forward and fires the energy spheres in the form of two energy waves.
  

TRANSFORMATIONS:

• Great Ape
  
• Hopefully future Super Saiyan
  

HISTORY:

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[Kazai]

I don't mind you changing Raditz quite a bit, however I see making him like Goku as a bit too much. He should still be ruthless in combat, slightly arrogant, and a bit cold, but I can most definitely see him falling in love as well and caring for a son. I think you just went too far in the other direction trying to make him like Goku.

Again, he does not need to be evil in the least bit. He could fight for just causes and stuff like that. I just don't think that it's feasible for him to completely change everything that he once believed and erase his Saiyan heritage from his system. In my mind, he could bond with his son, but most likely do that through training and fighting.

Also, he should not have completely disassociated himself from the Saiyans, though none of them work for Frieza directly any more anyway. Vegeta and Nappa are bounty hunters, and at the very least, you should probably have Raditz be on call, just in case they ever need to enlist his help.

Nonetheless, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your profile. Just to clarify, it's ok to have him as a good guy, but not to make him another Goku. A smidgen bit darker would be nice.

[Raditz]

Updated

[Kazai]

Once you remove Ki Sense and Masking, I can approve you (or any mod who sees it before me).

Power level is 19,876.

[Raditz]

Done

[Kazai]

Approved